Post by Jamie on Aug 3, 2005 9:35:47 GMT -5
Hi and welcome to a fanfic that is going to be written by me and martin, it is set in Johto, reviews are welcomed, although flames are not, heres an example of a flame, an e-mail i got from someone off the forum that must not be named, it was directed at my complaint department (ME):
Dear 2x4b,
I hate your fan-fics, they are p00rly written and your punctuation is rubbish, i hope you learn to write properly.
From ***
well they wanted this to go to the complaint department, *takes out flame thrower* well ***, THIS is the complaint department, *disintergrates the letter*, ok now on with the fan-fic.
this is a sprite of my character, just so you know
Jamie opened his bedroom door and walked inside, an Espeon walking behind him, Espeon was the family pokemon, "well Espeon, today is the day that I start off on my journey" Jamie said as he walked over to his desk and took his backpack off of it, he had packed last night so he could leave quickly, "ok Espeon I gotta go, I'll miss you" he said as he hugged him, <can I go with you?> Espeon asked, thats the advantage of growing up with a psychic pokemon, you develop a telepathic connection with them, in other words you hear what they're saying in your mind, "sorry wish I could buddy, but mom would freak" he replied, <come on please> Espeon said as he made his trademark sad face, "no not the face" he moaned, that was another little trick of Espeons, the sad face was his ticket to paradise, he tried but he just couldn't resist, well it looked like he was going to take Espeon with him on his journey, luckily if you took a family pokemon with you the Pokemon League still let you choose a pokemon,<thanks, thats why I like you, I'm you number one best bud, well except for Martin> Espeon said, Martin was Jamie's best friend, they had been that way since the first day of nursery school, "yeah thats true" he agreed, he then looked at his watch, it was...... 9:30AM!, he was late, "come on Espeon" he said as he slung his bag over his shoulder and ran downstairs, out the front door and off towards Professor Willows lab with Espeon at his heels.
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After 15 minutes of running they finally arrived at Professor Willow's lab, Jamie walked upto the front door and rang the doorbell, as if on cue Professor Willow answered, "oh hello Jamie" she greeted, "hello Professor" he said as he and Espeon walked inside, "you're kinda late so I only have one pokemon left" she said as they walked into a room with a pokeball on the table, "in here is a Gastly, would you like it?" she asked, he didn't want the Gastly, and for three reasons, one Espeon doesn't get on with ghost pokemon, two he doesn't get on with ghost pokemon and three martin would probably want it, "uhhhh.... you see Professor, me and Espeon don't get on with ghost pokemon" he said nervously, <too right> Espeon said, "well I do have one more pokemon" she said as she took a pokeball out of her pocket, "in this pokeball is an Abra" she said holding up the pokeball, "I'll take him" Jamie said, "ok then here you go" she said as she handed him the pokeball, "oh and here is your pokedex" she said, handing him a pokedex, he put Abra's pokeball on his belt and I also put the pokedex in its slot on his belt, "I trust you have pokeballs?" she asked, "yep" he replied, "ok then I guess you better be on your way" she said, "I sure do" he said, him and Espeon then walked out of the lab and onto their next adventure.
Martin: That must have been someone crap from Psypoke or Serebii as they now h8 Jamie for some reason.
Dear 2x4b,
I hate your fan-fics, they are p00rly written and your punctuation is rubbish, i hope you learn to write properly.
From ***
well they wanted this to go to the complaint department, *takes out flame thrower* well ***, THIS is the complaint department, *disintergrates the letter*, ok now on with the fan-fic.
this is a sprite of my character, just so you know
Jamie opened his bedroom door and walked inside, an Espeon walking behind him, Espeon was the family pokemon, "well Espeon, today is the day that I start off on my journey" Jamie said as he walked over to his desk and took his backpack off of it, he had packed last night so he could leave quickly, "ok Espeon I gotta go, I'll miss you" he said as he hugged him, <can I go with you?> Espeon asked, thats the advantage of growing up with a psychic pokemon, you develop a telepathic connection with them, in other words you hear what they're saying in your mind, "sorry wish I could buddy, but mom would freak" he replied, <come on please> Espeon said as he made his trademark sad face, "no not the face" he moaned, that was another little trick of Espeons, the sad face was his ticket to paradise, he tried but he just couldn't resist, well it looked like he was going to take Espeon with him on his journey, luckily if you took a family pokemon with you the Pokemon League still let you choose a pokemon,<thanks, thats why I like you, I'm you number one best bud, well except for Martin> Espeon said, Martin was Jamie's best friend, they had been that way since the first day of nursery school, "yeah thats true" he agreed, he then looked at his watch, it was...... 9:30AM!, he was late, "come on Espeon" he said as he slung his bag over his shoulder and ran downstairs, out the front door and off towards Professor Willows lab with Espeon at his heels.
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After 15 minutes of running they finally arrived at Professor Willow's lab, Jamie walked upto the front door and rang the doorbell, as if on cue Professor Willow answered, "oh hello Jamie" she greeted, "hello Professor" he said as he and Espeon walked inside, "you're kinda late so I only have one pokemon left" she said as they walked into a room with a pokeball on the table, "in here is a Gastly, would you like it?" she asked, he didn't want the Gastly, and for three reasons, one Espeon doesn't get on with ghost pokemon, two he doesn't get on with ghost pokemon and three martin would probably want it, "uhhhh.... you see Professor, me and Espeon don't get on with ghost pokemon" he said nervously, <too right> Espeon said, "well I do have one more pokemon" she said as she took a pokeball out of her pocket, "in this pokeball is an Abra" she said holding up the pokeball, "I'll take him" Jamie said, "ok then here you go" she said as she handed him the pokeball, "oh and here is your pokedex" she said, handing him a pokedex, he put Abra's pokeball on his belt and I also put the pokedex in its slot on his belt, "I trust you have pokeballs?" she asked, "yep" he replied, "ok then I guess you better be on your way" she said, "I sure do" he said, him and Espeon then walked out of the lab and onto their next adventure.
Martin: That must have been someone crap from Psypoke or Serebii as they now h8 Jamie for some reason.
