Post by SP on Aug 8, 2005 9:02:14 GMT -5
Heres a story i am working on the chapter are quite short so it wont take to long to read.
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Chapter 1 Mew
A bright light filled the sky. It was the solar eclipse. All of a sudden Mew awoke from sleeping. It looked at the sun shut its eyes and when they opened they were red.
It remembered the saddest and angriest moment of its life, when Mewtwo cloned pokemon and tryed to use them to take over the world. Mewtwo called Mew weak for not wanting to fight.
"Mewtwo called me weak", thought Mew. "I'll show Mewtwo weak", said Mew its teeth clenched and eyes full of hate.
Mew quickley flew off towards outerspace where Mewtwo had taken its army of clones.
Chapter 2 Mewtwo
Mewtwo was in outerspace. It was using its psychic powers to make stormclouds overhead to protect it from the eclipse. Mewtwo knew what the solar eclipse did to legendary pokemon.
"These storm clouds should protect me", said Mewtwo. "I just fear for the world, today will bring mass destruction, and harm to inocent people and pokemon".
Mewtwo sat and thought for a while.
"Should I warn the humans, and leave my clones here?"
"Or should i stay and protect them?"
Just that moment his Blastiose, Charizard, and Venasaur came up to it. They looked in Mewtwos eyes with eyes full of honor and trust.
"So be it, you three will take the clones to a safe place and watch over them forever", said Mewtwo
"GO!!!"
With that the three brave pokemon took the others to a safe faraway place. That was the last time Mewtwo ever saw them.
Then Mewtwo flew off to Earth to warn the pokemon and the people. But then he had a vision. With horror struck eyes Mewtwo turned around and went back to Saturn and waited for what was yet to come.
Chapter 3 Articuno, Zapdos, Moltres
In Kanto the three legendary bird pokemon were blinded for a few seconds. The solar eclipse was extremley bright especially in the sky.
When the three pokemon recovered their eyes were brick red. The three did not fight each other in stead they flew off in different directions.
Articuno flew off towards the Seafoam islands. When it got there it used ice beam over and over til' the islands were completley coverd by a thick layer of ice. Even then it still used ice beam til' the sea started to freeze.
Zapdos was on its way to Celadon city. When it got there it started to create a huge storm cloud untill the whole sky above Kanto was covered in a pitch black storm cloud. Then it used Thunder over and over til' the thunder storm started.
Moltres flew to Cinnabar island. It used FireBlast until the island was almost completley on fire. Then it caused the volcano to go off.
Lava flew everywhere.
Kanto was doomed.
Chapter 4 Lugia and Ho-oh
All of a sudden the water in Johto got very hot. The eclipse made its way to Johto. Both the whirlpool islands and the tin tower became very warm and bright waking the two great and powerfull Lugia and Ho-oh.
The whirlpool islands started to shake. Lugia emerged from the island, eyes red. It went in the sea to cool off but suddenly became quite angry. So it made a huge whirlpool and a 50 foot tall tidal wave. Cinawood and Olivine were right in the middle of these two disasters.
Ho-oh awoke looked at the sun blinked and suddenly its eyes turned red. It flapped its winds vigorosley. Then flew up into the sky and started to smash the tin tower. Then Ho-oh set it on fire. It continued untill' the tin tower was nothing but rubble.
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Chapter 5 Kyogre and Groudon
Kyogre stirred in its sleep. Then awoke with red eyes. It was angered for some reason. So the more it got angry the more it rained. First it was a sprinkle. Then to a shower. Then the rain came down hard. Soon it was a thunderstorm, then a flood. Then the storm turned into a hurricane a very destructive hurricane.
Groudon awoke very angry from its sleep. Its eyes were red. Then it thought of something something that made it angry. The angrier it got the hotter the sun got outside. Soon it was too hot to go out side and at least 97 degrese inside any shelter in Hoenn. After a while the hot weather and the huge hurricane were slowly deystroying Hoenn.
Chapter 6 Rayquaza
All of a sudden the sky pillar became quite hot. Then the wind blew the roof right off the pillar. Rayquaza awoke with red eyes. It roared out of anger. The roar was so loud that you could hear it over the 95 mile per hour wind. It flew into the air. The scolding temperature and huge hurricane didnt bother Rayquaza because it was so angry. Rayquaza flew to every town in Hoenn and started a tornado.
Chapter 7 Professor Mayple
Professor Mayple was in her lab in Johto on Mt Silver. She quicly paced back and forth across the room.
"Where are they? They better get here soon. I hope they dont get caught in storms" said Professor Mayple.
"Professor Mayple they sent a message" said one of Mayple's aids.
"Good let me see it Ben"
"Follow me Professor"
They walked into a room full of chairs, a few tables, a vending machine with food and drinkks, and some phones. This was the lobby where the researchers took their brakes.In the corner of the room a picture phone was on hold.
"Right here Professor" said Ben
"Thanks, now go do research on the storms"
Professor Mayple pushed a button on the phone, Pokemon Champions Lance, Steven, and Red were on the screen.
"Hello Professor" , said Steven.
"Did you talk to Professor Oak, Elm, and Birch?"
"Yes we did" said the Champions together.
"What did they say?"
"Oak said that it was only a legend that every 100 years on the solar eclipse the legendary pokemon became angered." said Red.
"Elm said that the pokemon wouldn't stop until the gaurdians stopped them....then we lost power before we could ask who the guardians were."said Lance
"Birch said that the bright sun turned thier eyes red he didnt know anything else." said Steven.
"Well , said Professoe Mayple they're all right but i know one thing that they dont.
"What? said Lance eagerly.
"The gaurdians are.......chshhhhhhh....were losing power.....they are....Rai..cshhhh kou, Entei, cshhh,.. and Suicune." said the Professor
"Okay we on our back up power we wont lose power now" said Ben
"Thanks" said Mayple
"Why them?, asked Red.
"Well it's sort of funny ever seen those pokemon? askes the Professor.
"Yes, said Lance what about them?"
"What color are they're eyes? said Mayple.
"Red" said Lance
"Because of their red eyes they arent effected by the eclipse, thats why their eyes are red to stop the madness of the pokemon.But because they were caught by three trainers they cant stop the madness" said Mayple
"So what do we do? asked Steven.
"Ill get the three trainers you must fight the pokemon keep then distracted, Lance you and your Elite 4 fight Lugia and Ho-oh. Steven you and your Elite 4 fight Groudon and Kyogre. Red you and your Elite 4 fight Articuno, Zapdos, and Moltres" said Mayple
"We'll fight em', said Red
"We'll get em for you, said Steven
"We wont let you down" , said Lance
Chapter 8 The Guardians
The Pokemon champions flew off in the directions of there home region. Professor Mayple dialed a number on the phone. It rang a few times then someone picked up.
"Hello this is Jerry.''
"Jerry it's me Professor Mayple."
"Hello Professor, what do you want?"
As you can see the world is in complete and total chaos."
"Yeah Professor I can see that"
If you can come down to the lab on Mt. Silver."
"OK ill try"
And bring your Suicune"
"OK see ya Professor."
"bye Jerry."
Mayple dialed another number.
"Hello Lucy here."
Hi Lucy it's me Professor Mayple."
"Hi im kinda busy with the storm and all."
"I know thats why I called, do you have your Raikou?"
"Yeah"
"Bring it to the lab on Mt.Sillver, i have to go."
"Okay will do bye."
Mayple then dialed the last number.
"Hello this is Bill."
"Bill i must be quick this is Professor Mayple, bring your Entei to the lab on Mt.Sillver."
"Okay ill be right there."
"There the calls are done" said Mayple.
"Professor?" said Ben.
"What?
"The storms are the worst recorded storms ever recorded in history."
"I just hope that Jerry, Lucy, and Bill make it here safley."
OK now that you read my story (well part of it) give me a rating (#/10) and ill give you some more chapters.
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Chapter 1 Mew
A bright light filled the sky. It was the solar eclipse. All of a sudden Mew awoke from sleeping. It looked at the sun shut its eyes and when they opened they were red.
It remembered the saddest and angriest moment of its life, when Mewtwo cloned pokemon and tryed to use them to take over the world. Mewtwo called Mew weak for not wanting to fight.
"Mewtwo called me weak", thought Mew. "I'll show Mewtwo weak", said Mew its teeth clenched and eyes full of hate.
Mew quickley flew off towards outerspace where Mewtwo had taken its army of clones.
Chapter 2 Mewtwo
Mewtwo was in outerspace. It was using its psychic powers to make stormclouds overhead to protect it from the eclipse. Mewtwo knew what the solar eclipse did to legendary pokemon.
"These storm clouds should protect me", said Mewtwo. "I just fear for the world, today will bring mass destruction, and harm to inocent people and pokemon".
Mewtwo sat and thought for a while.
"Should I warn the humans, and leave my clones here?"
"Or should i stay and protect them?"
Just that moment his Blastiose, Charizard, and Venasaur came up to it. They looked in Mewtwos eyes with eyes full of honor and trust.
"So be it, you three will take the clones to a safe place and watch over them forever", said Mewtwo
"GO!!!"
With that the three brave pokemon took the others to a safe faraway place. That was the last time Mewtwo ever saw them.
Then Mewtwo flew off to Earth to warn the pokemon and the people. But then he had a vision. With horror struck eyes Mewtwo turned around and went back to Saturn and waited for what was yet to come.
Chapter 3 Articuno, Zapdos, Moltres
In Kanto the three legendary bird pokemon were blinded for a few seconds. The solar eclipse was extremley bright especially in the sky.
When the three pokemon recovered their eyes were brick red. The three did not fight each other in stead they flew off in different directions.
Articuno flew off towards the Seafoam islands. When it got there it used ice beam over and over til' the islands were completley coverd by a thick layer of ice. Even then it still used ice beam til' the sea started to freeze.
Zapdos was on its way to Celadon city. When it got there it started to create a huge storm cloud untill the whole sky above Kanto was covered in a pitch black storm cloud. Then it used Thunder over and over til' the thunder storm started.
Moltres flew to Cinnabar island. It used FireBlast until the island was almost completley on fire. Then it caused the volcano to go off.
Lava flew everywhere.
Kanto was doomed.
Chapter 4 Lugia and Ho-oh
All of a sudden the water in Johto got very hot. The eclipse made its way to Johto. Both the whirlpool islands and the tin tower became very warm and bright waking the two great and powerfull Lugia and Ho-oh.
The whirlpool islands started to shake. Lugia emerged from the island, eyes red. It went in the sea to cool off but suddenly became quite angry. So it made a huge whirlpool and a 50 foot tall tidal wave. Cinawood and Olivine were right in the middle of these two disasters.
Ho-oh awoke looked at the sun blinked and suddenly its eyes turned red. It flapped its winds vigorosley. Then flew up into the sky and started to smash the tin tower. Then Ho-oh set it on fire. It continued untill' the tin tower was nothing but rubble.
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Chapter 5 Kyogre and Groudon
Kyogre stirred in its sleep. Then awoke with red eyes. It was angered for some reason. So the more it got angry the more it rained. First it was a sprinkle. Then to a shower. Then the rain came down hard. Soon it was a thunderstorm, then a flood. Then the storm turned into a hurricane a very destructive hurricane.
Groudon awoke very angry from its sleep. Its eyes were red. Then it thought of something something that made it angry. The angrier it got the hotter the sun got outside. Soon it was too hot to go out side and at least 97 degrese inside any shelter in Hoenn. After a while the hot weather and the huge hurricane were slowly deystroying Hoenn.
Chapter 6 Rayquaza
All of a sudden the sky pillar became quite hot. Then the wind blew the roof right off the pillar. Rayquaza awoke with red eyes. It roared out of anger. The roar was so loud that you could hear it over the 95 mile per hour wind. It flew into the air. The scolding temperature and huge hurricane didnt bother Rayquaza because it was so angry. Rayquaza flew to every town in Hoenn and started a tornado.
Chapter 7 Professor Mayple
Professor Mayple was in her lab in Johto on Mt Silver. She quicly paced back and forth across the room.
"Where are they? They better get here soon. I hope they dont get caught in storms" said Professor Mayple.
"Professor Mayple they sent a message" said one of Mayple's aids.
"Good let me see it Ben"
"Follow me Professor"
They walked into a room full of chairs, a few tables, a vending machine with food and drinkks, and some phones. This was the lobby where the researchers took their brakes.In the corner of the room a picture phone was on hold.
"Right here Professor" said Ben
"Thanks, now go do research on the storms"
Professor Mayple pushed a button on the phone, Pokemon Champions Lance, Steven, and Red were on the screen.
"Hello Professor" , said Steven.
"Did you talk to Professor Oak, Elm, and Birch?"
"Yes we did" said the Champions together.
"What did they say?"
"Oak said that it was only a legend that every 100 years on the solar eclipse the legendary pokemon became angered." said Red.
"Elm said that the pokemon wouldn't stop until the gaurdians stopped them....then we lost power before we could ask who the guardians were."said Lance
"Birch said that the bright sun turned thier eyes red he didnt know anything else." said Steven.
"Well , said Professoe Mayple they're all right but i know one thing that they dont.
"What? said Lance eagerly.
"The gaurdians are.......chshhhhhhh....were losing power.....they are....Rai..cshhhh kou, Entei, cshhh,.. and Suicune." said the Professor
"Okay we on our back up power we wont lose power now" said Ben
"Thanks" said Mayple
"Why them?, asked Red.
"Well it's sort of funny ever seen those pokemon? askes the Professor.
"Yes, said Lance what about them?"
"What color are they're eyes? said Mayple.
"Red" said Lance
"Because of their red eyes they arent effected by the eclipse, thats why their eyes are red to stop the madness of the pokemon.But because they were caught by three trainers they cant stop the madness" said Mayple
"So what do we do? asked Steven.
"Ill get the three trainers you must fight the pokemon keep then distracted, Lance you and your Elite 4 fight Lugia and Ho-oh. Steven you and your Elite 4 fight Groudon and Kyogre. Red you and your Elite 4 fight Articuno, Zapdos, and Moltres" said Mayple
"We'll fight em', said Red
"We'll get em for you, said Steven
"We wont let you down" , said Lance
Chapter 8 The Guardians
The Pokemon champions flew off in the directions of there home region. Professor Mayple dialed a number on the phone. It rang a few times then someone picked up.
"Hello this is Jerry.''
"Jerry it's me Professor Mayple."
"Hello Professor, what do you want?"
As you can see the world is in complete and total chaos."
"Yeah Professor I can see that"
If you can come down to the lab on Mt. Silver."
"OK ill try"
And bring your Suicune"
"OK see ya Professor."
"bye Jerry."
Mayple dialed another number.
"Hello Lucy here."
Hi Lucy it's me Professor Mayple."
"Hi im kinda busy with the storm and all."
"I know thats why I called, do you have your Raikou?"
"Yeah"
"Bring it to the lab on Mt.Sillver, i have to go."
"Okay will do bye."
Mayple then dialed the last number.
"Hello this is Bill."
"Bill i must be quick this is Professor Mayple, bring your Entei to the lab on Mt.Sillver."
"Okay ill be right there."
"There the calls are done" said Mayple.
"Professor?" said Ben.
"What?
"The storms are the worst recorded storms ever recorded in history."
"I just hope that Jerry, Lucy, and Bill make it here safley."
OK now that you read my story (well part of it) give me a rating (#/10) and ill give you some more chapters.
